Honestly, I have very little experience as an editor. I am, however, a writer, and according to a former college professor (with a Princeton PhD in English literature, no less), a very gifted one. I offer the opinion of a professional writer and an exceedingly kinky mind, but I do not profess to be any more than that. Your story is your own, and much as I may edit the wording of your story, I think it is important that it remain in your own voice. Should you choose me to edit your story, and should I choose to accept the invitation, I will offer an opinion and suggestions: no more, no less.