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Click hereI love to get feedback and inspiration from other Literotica members.
It's true what the above poster said; the end is a bit anti-climatic, but even in a few hundred words I really latched onto the Jillian character. I liked her dialogue a lot, like this line:
"You're beautiful and he's a dumbass."
The beginning was a bit too focused on Heather's obsession with the football jock, in my opinion, but mostly I felt myself desiring a "morning after" chapter.
Just a bit anti climatic,I love the clit against thigh part,would liked to had more on that.