Pupils

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My man is a plucked bird,
Naked with little hairs,
Singing to me.
He comes waddling in,
A cold, shaking mess
For me to cup tenderly
And feed my ripe fruit.
His lips go traveling
On a southbound freeway,
Stippling with saliva,
My mind one-tracked and hungry
Like a hovering snail kite.
I notice his irises dilate in
As they recede beyond a pelvic horizon,
And wonder why we scientists would give name
To the eye’s empty space.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
An extremely

fun piece with some imaginative imagery, loved the lines

'My man is a plucked bird,

Naked with little hairs,

Singing to me'

that made me smile

keep up the good work

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sexy Sentry

Here's a girl who stays alert during sex ~ and observes everything taking place within sight or hearing.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Sounds like you're having fun but the description of the man ~ ugh ~ sounds so unappetizing.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Sensual gratification...

after his lips go traveling on a southbound freeway,

which makes her wonder about his eyes..Well done.

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