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Click here"Well ... get inside and get washed up for supper," I said, standing and moving to front door. I embraced Tom and each of the young women as they passed by me into the living room.
I watched them as they disappeared inside. I sighed. I really had not ever wanted them to grow up, but—there it is.
My two lovers, my wives, came to me, holding me in their arms for a long moment and kissing me over and over. After a while, I opened the screen door and ushered them inside. I closed the screen door behind me and walked around the house to find our babies out in the backyard. I wanted to hug and play with them before they grew up too.
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I have met and loved four women in my life. One betrayed me, two left me behind before reentering my world, and one left me a widower. If there is anything that I've learned from them, it's that life just keeps marching on and it's a heady ride. You better grab on and hold tight because the twists and turns will throw you if you aren't careful.
THE END
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 hours agoEnjoyable series and very entertaining. Personally I didn't like the ending to it as I felt the whole Mercedes Stephanie thing didn't add to the story at all in fact it felt nothing more than added in for a titillation factor the same with their children hooking up. Up to then I felt this was really good. Overall well worth a read even though I feel the first half was better than the second. BardnotBard
RedRachael9 days agoI was in love with the his story right up until the marriage became a 3-way. Ugh…. Absolutely great love story for hat didn’t need that ending.
KwazyWabbit2 months agoI don’t give out many 5’s
This was worth every star. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
TrainerOfBimbos2 months agoI like the story enough, but I felt it was in the wrong category. It's more of a romance story than a "loving wives" tale and I have to admit that once we got past the episode of the plane crash, the story itself lost all of it's momentum because there wasn't any real drama or conflict, just Matt living his life and generally winning - yes, even though he lost one wife, he ended up in a throuple with two hot women younger than him and I think that's considered winning in most peoples books. Hell, he didn't even wait all that long before his wife died to remarry - like he was more cut about his first wife cheating on him than losing Sharon to cancer.
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And speaking of Faye - Why even bother bringing her back for the second chapter if this is going to be 90% "I've moved on" content? I thought maybe there might be some drama here, or a false (or real) reconciliation to bring some pathos into the story, but noooo.... He just tells her off again and we never hear from her again. What's the point of that?
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I guess I just felt like the narrative didn't have any structure. You could have ditched the first chapter and summarized it in a couple of paragraphs and then wrote your memoir/romance story instead. I get that you tried to bookend the story by having it start with a MFF (cheating) couple and end with a MFF (loving) couple, but it frankly didn't really work and in a large part it's because everything in between those bookends was so meandering and outlandish.
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I don't know, I thought "Separate Lives" was a much better series because it really kept focusing on the relationship drama and overall I felt like it was tighter in it's narration (but still kind of meandering). I was shocked to see that there was 12 years difference between you writing that and writing this story, because while maybe the craftsmanship of the sentences has gotten better, you REALLY need to thumbnail down the plot before you start writing. If you were tighter here, you'd easily be a fantastic writer because your storytelling is good. It's just sometimes us readers get confused about what story you are trying to tell.
