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Click here"I have already checked my findings three times Captain. There can be no doubt. It is a rupture in time/space and is closing as we speak." He said his eyes wide with surprise and excitement.
"Send a message to the Empress, tell her... tell her we found it!"
The Ghost Dancer sped through hyperspace as the crew celebrated their success. The bottle of champagne had been set aside for just this moment. They had done it! Beyond all odds they accomplished the nigh on impossible. Susan Storm, the invisible woman, held up her glass and toasted to their good health and to seeing the expression on his face when they got back.
"How long until we reach Midgard?" She asked Morya, the dark elf copilot.
"Nearly a solar cycle, twenty-three hours in human reckoning." She replied. "I had placed the odds of success below the one percentile."
"Yeah, but we didn't do this for us... we did it for him." Jennifer declared.
"Speaking of him, where is he?" Morya asked.
"Last update we got they were storming Von Doom's palace. If I know him, he'll be in the thick of it." Susan chuckled.
"No shit!" Jennifer laughed. "So... what should we do once we finish this bottle?"
"I vote for Bark at the Moon." Morya purred.
"Interesting choice," Susan replied with a grin. "I counteroffer with Bound to Please."
"Ooh, two great choices," Jennifer giggled mischievously. "I vote for both."
Twenty-three hours and five minutes later.
The Ghost Dancer leapt out of hyperspace near the orbit of the Earth. Still cloaked its arrival was undetected by those below. Susan contacted Director Jean Grey and received the news. Ghost Fire was missing, and the time portal was still open.
Fade to Black.
- COMMENTS
CrazyBastidalmost 3 years agoFunny how some post comments demanding changes that have nothing to do with the story concept. Pegging and a drag show in a VR game about princesses made by a porn company?
LOL!
Anyways, keep up the good work, LostBoy. Details in stories this big can be a major pain in the ass, but you do a far better job at it than I do. Props on that.
And while I might wish for more, faster, I am something of an amateur writer myself and know how it goes. Life comes first. If you don't take care of life, you can't very well write, now can you? So get better and don't worry about nay sayers who think you should include pegging in a story about a guy getting it on with tons of badass babes.
-CB
GrantLeeStoneabout 3 years agoIs not a proper usage.
You are looking for the phrase, “ more dire,” or “even more dire.”
MJ wants to dominate. Will she ever peg Ghost? Ghost is fixated on asses and anal sex. How come the nobody has even fingered his ass or tossed his salad?
Why are ALL the gender-bent heroes Male to Female? Where are the Female to Male gender bends? I would love to see Ghost seduced by The White King! Or Iceman! Or Archangel. How about Tinker-Beau? Cinder-Fella? Or Stephen Strange. Are you scared of bisexual or gay men? At least have a Drag Show at the Bar!
Jessica1986over 4 years agoVery good work take your time I have read everything that you have put on the website
Lost Boyover 4 years agoAuthorIf you go to my profile there is a relatively accurate timeline of my stories.
litreader9696over 4 years ago...take your time. When it comes to what I read, I prefer quantity over quality, unless I can get both. :)
The first story of yours I read was A Brief Moment of Insanity. I loved where it was headed, but that was the only story I read, and it seemed to be missing very large chunks of story. The last chapter lost me from word one, it felt like there was a time jump of ten or more years...
Later I began reading some Nick Shaw stories, but I'm pretty sure I was missing something there, too. It was still awesome, but I could really use a roadmap of the reading order for that particular universe.
When I gleefully dove into PTW, I admit, the name Kat Shaw meant absolutely nothing to me, at least until I just went back and looked at the list of characters at the beginning of ABMoI, Ch. 9. Now I'm not sure what I've read, and what I haven't.
So, I'm waiting anxiously for PTW Ch. 7, and hoping you already have the chapter by chapter reading list for the Warren Harrower/ Nick Shaw/ Booker Anderson universe that you could copy/paste into a quick note. I've seen other authors do similar things, such as when BurntRedstone made up a simple map of the neighborhood that is the setting for one of his series, which later turned into multiple series of the same story and characters, the Ben Shepherd series'.
Thanks again, and I hope to be reading your work for years to come.
