Tears of the Fallen Ch. 18

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Not sure why they bothered refrigerating poison when it was packed into bullets - pointing that out in case you publish.

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_eover 9 years ago
Forgot to comment about this earlier

McLaren engine a rusty old van...awesome!

Though I question its handling ability ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Upfront. I read Literotica for the sex, usually. I am really not into vampires and werewolves.

Don't care for Twilight. Can't stand True Blood! I saw a new chapter of the F.T.I. saga had been posted. I immediately started over at the beginning and 're-read every chapter!

I like your style of writing. I know this a "hobby", but keep on posting! At the same time I wish you success in your professional writing career.

92honeyalmond9292honeyalmond92almost 10 years ago
OMG

Freaking fantastic!!! Can't wait for the next submission :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Fantastic, as always...

1) Yes, your family comes first over everything else, even the writing of this series;

2) Yes, ignore even those of your readers who yearn for more when you are not ready ...esp those who would write mean comments to you. We, on the other hand, are always grateful that you can find the time to continue each series....thank you. If you should get all the series publish into 1 book (since the stores are intertwine), I shall be one of the 1st to buy it...and will let my friends know as well.

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Now my guess.....

Dont think it will be Kothari...why? he is inexperienced and he cannot control his vampiric side...anyone who is this unstable will probably fail...To me, Mila's vision will surely refer to the Trumvirate, or one of the them anyway - possibly Gard, though I would love it to be the Trumvirate. Why? Because present vampires have no knowledge of their existence simply b/c the Council has wiped away their history and even of Sarayne's birth....it would be fantastic to have the Ts put the young arrogants

into their proper places....and then install a Council similar one similar to the Stateside.

What intrigues me is this young female vam in Mila's vision and what has she got to do with what's coming...? A child of Anakatrine maybe that neither Callaine nor Ana ever spoke of because it was so painful they would never talk of it again, and not realizing she had survived? After all, Ana took over her Queen, and Ana must have someone to continue her line....? Just a thought....

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