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Click hereJackson has something planed for tonight, he says it's very important for me to be on time and to be dressed, I don't mean just dressed, I mean Dressed!! We shall see what tonight brings. I am not afraid of him or his past I know I love him good bad or indifferent.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoIt was going to be a great story which I felt that merited 5 stars until I became bored with the number of grammar and spelling mistakes. You really need to get someone to proof read your stories before posting them.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThe grammar was agonizing. It had the bones of a good read, but I couldn't stand the sloppy writing long enough to finish.
celestialbeingabout 16 years agoHotdamn this is truly a new favorite. You have a way with words!
CallistaLynaeover 17 years agobad b movie. The grammar sucked, the paragraphs were long and rambling. My advice, practice and get an editor.
Anonymousover 17 years agoloved it needed more chapters keep writing love your work write more soon please
