by magicalmouse
I just love your poem! You really made me see and hear and feel this. Great job--post more, please. :)
onomatopoeia (I had to look up the spelling of that one). A nice rhythm here, I felt the looms click-clacking... Excellent.
-- I have a non-erotic short story by the same name that posted yesterday. Very different story, but fun timing.
jim : )
Wonderful. My grandfather was a weaver and we have the shuttle cock to prove it
oh my isnt that what it is called?
but seriously, this sounded exactly as it has been described to me. Thanks! Came here after reading New Poem review.