by damppanties
So many colors and smells and textures
Very rich writing.
Creates almost a tapestry with words
very nice indeed
Thank you
Beautiful, so many soft and inviting words. I can smell the flowers and incense in the air.
It is so sensual and descriptive. I really love poetry that evokes the senses so that the words take on texture and dimension as this does. :)
I wanted more, I didn'want it to end. Like a previous poster mentioned, this piece has a texture, and a richness to it. In a few brief lines I was transported to another place.