by YKN4949
Thanks for resisting the temptation of having this end w/the "daughters" coming through the door. I can't wait for more, a hot orgy will write itself.
I guess the next chapter will be about the girls walk to the store. Thanks.
And still not sure what the story is about. A lot of words have been used and the characters have been well and truly introduced, if overdone. But I must have missed the point of the story.
Sex itself can be great, but for me it is the relationship that really makes the experience. This story once again exhibits empathy and understanding from the author. An arousing story that helps me fulfill my elusive dreams. Thanks
I really enjoy your work so much. Please keep writing stories with such emotional exchange between characters. It’s refreshing to read about healthy relastionshios. Thank you for your work.
I like how you wrote the protagonists' emotions and actions into a crescendo. I can't wait to read the other two parts
you are the best writer of trans tales, just the best, and this one is splendid. Norma Jane.
You write the best stories on this site or at least all my favourites.
I'm a trans lesbian, and good porn about girls like me is almost always written by girls like me. But this... you've done your research. Not every detail was perfectly on point, but I felt respected and safe, it felt mechanically sound, and just... I can relax into reading it, which is just the hottest thing. Thank you. It actually means a lot. Also, I love "its only sexy if you know why someone is having sex", which I think is the root of why I'm into friend sex and incest kinks? So basically this story was amazing, and I had a lovely time reading it tonight. I'm excited to read the next chapter.
I loved the story of these two. Can’t wait to read more about heather and Jennifer. There sexual encounters are very erotic!
Outstanding. I've been a lurker but I'm going to join so that I can own up to my comments. Your writing is very enjoyable to read and I love the story as much as the erotica.
Best wishes and lots of love
From Miami 305 LGBQT
BTW, the word is dysphoria. Dysmorphia is similar, but not quite the same. Thanks.
Don't sweat the typos!
Well said! It is an excellent story and I really loved the interplay between the 2 friends. Looking forward to how the daughters relate on their walk. I have read quite a few of your stories abs I really like your style. Outstanding!
Great story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you, for sharing your work.
It really is a gem, but like a tiara, it's worth the company of more gems/chapters to make it a real crown-jewel.