All Comments on 'A Serendipitous Adventure Ch.02'

I was glad to see that you continued the adventure and enjoyed it until the end.

When you ended with the story thread of us poluting humans,

it kind of turned me off.

Now if you wanted to say something like, "This will calm good ole mother nature after killing a quarter million with a tidal wave........

Fine tale but spoilt by continual use of "your" when you mean "you're". "Your" is posessive:"your bucket" "you're" is short for "you are", which is the easy way to remember it... so "your going to save the world" should be "you ARE going to save the world".

Unless you mean "your bucket is going to save the world"!