by CharmingVixen
always great to see an update from u and another HOTTTT chapter!! Whenever and wherever they come i'll be reading!!
I was afraid you weren't going to continue this one anytime soon...I'm glad you did. I'm also glad that you fleshed out the story a bit with the issue with Nahid. Please keep writing. :)
Please continue this story - it is so good and I hope to read more of it soon.
All five chapters have been very enjoyable to read. You are an excellent writer and I would love to see this story expand. I love how you've started to develop the characters and plot more, and stopping here is a tease! I've read countless submissions on lit. and come across so many stories that are disappointments or that are poorly written. This is by far neither.
Please please continue this story! I hope to see many more from you!
OMG!!!! This was the freakin best. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this!!!!!
Wanted to submit this under Chapter 6 but I had no chance to submit 2 reviews. Copying and pasting it here:
You honestly have to write faster though! I was lucky enough to start in on this series late and managed to read up to Chapter 6, but I went to your profile and saw that the chapters are months apart! I understand your want for a great story but...can you do that fast as well? I'm asking for a lot because this story has commanded my full attention! Please do write more!
This story has been so entertaining, and yet has not been pure sex. Far from it. I love the turmoil that she causes in him. And yet, I feel bad for him, knowing all he wants to do is love her. Bravo!