by evanslily
Another great story of yours and another great chapter. Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter. I love the characters but of course I hate the cliffhangers!
I love the story and can't wait for the next installment, also eager to know how they feel to one another.
The love scenes are hot!! I am so glad you updated
really good one.. i read ur last story too.. yep u r a romantic like me ;-). please please keep the chapters coming..
Is that the finish???
I think you could do a lot with this plot.
This was great reading. Whatever the plot or story line it, it is hinted at well enough. What I liked most was the character development, and the descriptions. Both main characters are powerfully developed and Rebecca is such a dream. Oh yes she is rough on the outside but I suspect it is because she is so vulnerable and loving. I adore her already.
I wonder if she perceived that exchange among the guys correctly at the end of this chapter?
The dialog, the carefully constructed plot, the rich, intriguing characters. The compelling love play...
I love this story!
You're really, really good. I am inarticulate in the face of your goodness. Fire bad and tree pretty inarticulate. Yes, you're just *that* good.
Can’t wait for more.
Your story has so much promise.
Ah, hopefully Luke's smile and his friends bet are not what they seem to be.
Your ability to draw the reader into the plot and further into identifying with the main characters is awesome. I'll bet you told great stories at campouts and sleepovers, or keeping wide eyed kids awake before bedtime. You must know you are very, very good, even when you are bad.
(A good/great kisser indeed?)