All Comments on 'Cupid's Arrow'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
bloody fantastic

WOW! Just reading this made me cum and cum, my knickers were soggy by the time i got to the end. Fantastic....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done. My thinking is - you have two choices. Start a new story or take her back to reality,put her back in her car, but on the road headed to work, and her meeting. Maybe, a stud drops by that afternoon, and you take it from there. Good grammar and editing. Keep writing.

XYZ

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