All Comments on 'Diavolo Ch. 10'

Loved it. Thank you!

Another great chapter. This story keeps getting better all the time. Easily worth 5 stars.

I wish Gabriel would give Diamond the boot or put his foot up her behind for messing with Abby. Abby is too nice so I don't see her kicking Diamond's behind.

They both need to talk to each other. Diamond needs to go.

Great chapter. So glad you're okay. Diamond is a bitch, and whats up with Daniel? That Paulinas got something up het sleeve, Gabe better be careful. Loved the bathroom scene!

No, really, it was a really good chapter. I would love to see Abby get stronger and maybe Gab and his brother get along.

I hope Daniel's and Abby's Mom get what's coming to them.

I'm so sorry you were sick! I checked here every day to see if you posted. You said you would be slowing down, but dang! Not expecting that. Glad you see your genius was not kept down. You are a real talent. I've read everything you've posted and have to say your writing and imagination are tremendous! Thank you for all your hard work and your sacrifice!! I know how hard it is to craft something amidst "real life". Thanks again!!

Glad to hear you're on the mend, and I was so glad to see this chapter. Something is really off with Daniel, and I think Gabe is onto him. I love Gabe and Abby together, it's great reading them grow into a couple. I can't wait for whatever you have in store.

Keep getting better and take care!

Welcome back! I am so happy to hear you are feeling better. I have to say this is the best chapter of this series yet. I love the new direction you are going with the characters too.

glad you're feeling better, great chapter!

That was such a good chapter. It's good to know that you're doing better. And I hope that you're able to continue the series and continue putting out chapters frequently.

We all missed you here.

This was an excellent chapter. The magic is still there. I like Gabe's dominance. He even said himself that he was a caveman but I guess, a less volatile Gabriel is even better. Loved how he poured out his heart to Abby. Now she needs to do the same. I guess she doesn't know that guys like to hear the words too.

He needs to open up to her about his aunt and the 'accident' so that she doesn't think he's being ridiculous by having a gun in their place. And she needs to tell him what's really going on with his bitch manager. We all know she didn't tell Gabe that Abby called.

I love Gabriel and Abigail together and it makes me sad to know that bad things are about to happen. But I trust you to bring us all the happy ending we crave.

Thanks so much for pushing through you recovery and giving us more of your characters.

To everyone who voted and commented. I really appreciate your feedback! :)

I uploaded chapter 11 last night. Again, I apologize for editing errors as my vision is not well these days. I'm experiencing a lot of vertigo and it's hard for me to write/read/look down. If I can find someone who'd help me out in the editing process that would be wonderful, but in the meantime it is what it is. I suppose the story should post tomorrow, Tuesday, as usual. It's up to Lit now. Hope everyone has a fantastic day!

Well I guess they'll put it up tomorrow then :/

I'm sorry, but as good as this is, why was she surprised it wasn't an accident when in a previous chapter she HEARD her sister and the driver talking about running him off the road? Its not the only thing you've done that with, her first kiss an hand holding was repeated also, like they'd never discussed it.