by Gaucho
That knife on his cock made me cross my legs and I'm not even made that way. :D Horrific, gratifying details, G. I loved it. Kept me guessing till the end. Keep writing.
Great story.
Especially loved the ending!
I have a whole new appreciation for erotic horror now.
at just the thought of that knife. Excellent work. Your output may not be prolfic, but always worth reading.
That plot had more twists and turns than the dangerous road in the story!! Somewhat improbable, and I think the first half was better than the second half. Still, extremely original and not likely to be duplicated in the future! Good luck!
Well crafted story. Unexpected turns, shuddering knife work.
Good luck.
Neon
Y'know I always knew there was a mad slasher buried inside of you. Great Job.
I like it! Very nice! Dark and hot and chilling all at the same time.
I'm not a fan of horror, but I must admit I really enjoyed reading the story.
The descriptive details had me shivering and hot...Great work!
Very well done! So many twists and turns - every time that I thought I knew what was next, I was wrong! I was so caught up and spooked that I jumped right out of my seat when the phone rang while I was reading. LOL