by Frederick Carol
I do love a good romance, and this one is exquisite!
I know the pain of losing a dear love, and I just wish there'd been a Mariane Duquesne in my life. Too late now, but I can still dream about it.
This could have been awkward in the wrong hands....that just shows what a great writer you are! Good luck with the contest!
That was a well-done little tale with a nice twist. Good work.
Rumple
This was a very sweet, very romantic story. I found myself also saying "God bless you, Marianne Duquesne." Although I write mostly pure smut (impure smut to some) I like a romantic story like this also.
I enjoyed reading your story.
It is a lovely romantic tale.
Good luck.
The title says it all.
I loved it.
John
but very nice nevertheless - It would be nice to believe this could happen in real life.
A nice, mild and lovely story and very romantic. I just wished there would be more character development but just the thought that this could actually happen, makes for a nice. wishful story.
Thank you - keep them coming.
Thought it was cute and it even made me tear up a little bit. Short and sweet, tender.
that I have read from Frederick. It has the tender romance and yet the sultry and exotic flare that makes his stories readable and lovable. And, I have a special Marianne as well which makes it all the better. Thanks.
The last paragraph really lifted this already excellent story to another level.
I am not skilled or schooled enough to know why, but for some reason your stories flow along seemingly seamlessly. Your well chosen words are able to have pictures leaping off the page and into my mind.
I love that your descriptions of sex are basic everyday words. They are neither OTT nor drenched in soppy ugly flowery descriptive language. No velvet chutes here. No needless use of profanities.
Thank you.