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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Author's REPEATED use of the word SHE is most confusing. Since more than one woman in the story - often I had no idea who is being mentioned. Finally I gave up - shame because so easy to correct but please use the proper name to avoid confusion.

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