All Comments on 'Jack be Nimble: Dessert'

This was an excellent story! I loved the 1st person, diary style. Very graphic and sexy. The humour was great! You've got a great way of writing and I throughly enjoyed this. Thank you!

Well Jack, I must say, you put on quite a show... I would love to know how life with your new toy works out. I truly enjoyed reading all three parts of this submission. Please continue.

FRESH TAKE ON AN OLD SUBJECT, ENJOYED THE TRILOGY AND HOPE THERE ARE FUTURE INSTALLMENTS. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

i'd like to read more...

Love the sardonic humor, poking fun at the human condition. Being a reader of vampire novels, I would say to you, keep writing and have a publisher read your work. Jack could be a winner as a subject for a novel, and not just a short novella. I could see Jack invading the environs of St. Louis and come up against Anita Blake (focus character of Laurell Hamilton's novels), or telling of his exploits across the world during the 20th century. Keep up the good work, and I'll expect to see you on the bookshelves of Borders.

And read them, and read them, but I still love them, Tyler. They are truly and completely entertaining, and I love coming back to enjoy them.

FtF

Sure loved this story, but feel the end sucked. Was waiting for more of the saga when I turned the page. Please continue on with what he does with the gal, does he keep her????

Absolutely, brilliant. Was sorry to see that this author has not written anything more. Please, "Jack," come back...

i've saved this to 'my favourites' - just to remind myself that a good, well written story is actually possible. excellent.

Jack- Where's the rest?

Missing the hunger,

Butterfly