All Comments on 'Love At First Bite?'

Your story was beautifully written, I truley enjoyed it. Thank you.

Humorous, witty, well written and absolutely erotic! I've read a number of your stories, and they all keep surpassing my expectations! Brava!

It's not normally that I find a romantic story on Literotica; this is the second I've read so far. Wonderful, keep writing!

Erotic indeed. And though not my usual "type" or subject as a reader, this author has skill and style in all the wonderful ways of the pen. I enjoyed this story completely - even while blushing a bit - but note that this author could write..if so inclined, the world.

Damn that was good! So hot... so delicious... send that bloodsucker my way!!! Please keep writing stuff like this! I luv it!

loved the story and characters but bare instead of bear and other mistakes got a bit distracting.

Amazing story. One of my favorites!

this is the greatest story i have ever heard you are truly talented

You write wonderful sex scenes, and the chemistry between the characters was great! However, my quibble would be to please stop referring to the female character as 'pet' or 'dove' in EVERY single sentence directed at her. After the first time, it gets very repetitive and distracting. You're doing an awesome job - keep writing!

I love this story! Well written. Even though it was short, it was just the right length. Well done!

Very nicely done. I'm surprised she didn't take more emotional response to being called Dove, or Pet as often as he said it, but other than that, the story was beautiful.

Almost brought tears to my eyes, I wasn't expecting that but wow... :')

I liked the first half of the story, when she was rejecting his clumsy advances, and I was really hoping she'd start hitting him over the head with something hard and heavy, as he persisted with his talk of pet & my dove. This could have been a great humour piece. Oh well, this being literotica I suppose he had to succeed in having his way with her. . .

I've read this story several times and I love it each and every time! I wish you would write more about these two characters. They are so sweet together.

I honestly LOVED that story beyond any story about vampires I have ever read before.

Agree with MoonlightSky. You should do another Ash & Shade story :)

Very nice and hot. But ever dove doesn't need to be virginal.

Well done! Thanks for this great read :) Keep up the good work

I'd love to read more.

This is one of my favourite stories here at Literotica - it seems that the expressions "my pet" and "little dove" have bothered some people ... my goodness what did you expect ? Bear in mind that this vampire is a creature that has been living since the time that women were treated as fragile individuals, as jewels to be cherished ... and if you loved them, these were some of terms used to express this love ! It's neither inappropriate nor sexist for Shade to use them with Ash - this is how he behaves with a woman and someone he has feelings for. I could never imagine him turning to Ash and saying "Let's hook up" or more crudely "Let's fuck".

I loved this story - it was a sweet love story (one of the main characters is unfortunately not real, but it sure is part of our sexual fantasies ...).

Their lovemaking was beautiful, Shade was gentle, considerate and generous towards an 'innocent' woman, full of self doubts and very low self esteem.

I really wish there were more stories of these two. I absolutely loved this one and it's in my favourite list - I really don´t know why I didn't comment when I read it first 3 or 4 years ago ... SACHIAIKO COME BACK !! You are sorely missed !!

I love this, I want more!!!

Good but very familiar to the other vampire story. Unfortunately in my country we have been inundated with American slang words about sex, this is due to the free porn on the Internet, even European porn use these words to export to America and not confuse people there. However I did see a couple of words from my country (well 4 nation's!!) such as bloody and daft....Next thing you will be taking other words such as Twat and Twit, but don't get the two mixed up as they have different meanings!! Are you lot word magpies?!!!