by Alex De Kok
Well written and hot! How about a follow-up story on these two lovers?
Straightforward, honest and simple. Nice for a change.....Thanks! Without annoying spelling and grammatical errors. I think this couple should be explored further, as I like them!
very well written. refreshingly so. you would do well to continue.
Very well written. No spelling or grammatical errors. And very grown up. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.
to the chain. Reading about an older couple was refreshing. Good job.
Well crafted and descriptive. Realistic dialogue and characters. An excellent addition to the chain. Kudos.
Awesome job Alex, I knew you could handle this category without any problems, and this story proves it. Hope to hear more from Jack and Helen again someday.
a really sweet and sexy story, although I can't help but think they would have needed more lubrication.
This is the second tale of yours that I have read. Both proved to be an excellent read with: believable premise and characters, loving exchange between consenting adults and leaving the readers panting for MORE! Very, very well done.
I don't think I've ever been close to a similar situation. No house guest ever seemed to want me to join her or me, as a guest, never heard such a request. So, I especially enjoyed this little episode since it points to a situation that might still come to pass. Thanks to Alex for bringing it to us.