by oggbashan
A very good read Ogg. Very believable in the desire to rebel against the authority of the parent but unwilling to take it too far and the table turning against the brother. Nice that you show that she does not feel he was totally justified in his spankings and he thinks he's been a saint just because he did not do things to as harsh of a degree as the other person.
Very different and very interesting, like Og. Good luck!
Very different and an excellent read, I wish my own contest entry had such panache!