by mtnman2003
i want more of this story. it made me so hot, i loved how forceful he was with her...but do pay more attention to details like spelling and scene development
Great - just what I need right now. I am a woman who likes it forceful and this story is fantastic.
There were numerous errors in the story, both logical, and grammatical/typo. But the sheer energy and ferocity that came through in the telling, carried it to a high where you let go of that as quibbles.
- JT
IMHO this story would be much hotter without the crude language and insults. Jim's position of authority is all that was needed to force Sara to have sex.