by Master_Vassago
I thought this was your best storie so far, i wish i was her
IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE!NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE! ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE ! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE You get it?! NOT BDSM IT'S RAPE/RELUCTANCE!
I was a bit disappointed by this chapter. I didn't like that she left him, but I could get past that. What really bothered me was that it seemed almost perfunctory; it felt more like a rushed denouement to a story that was already substantially completed rather than the full story arc that the plot deserved.