by katnip_21f
Well written cliff hanger. Hot and bothered waiting to see what happens next.
This story almost hits home- something that happened to me just over a year ago. Incredible story, well written, very indepth. And your concept of military is excellent. Please continue!!!
When I started the story, it reminded me of a soap opera, and the coincidence of the woman being the daughter of the man's CO made it even more so. The sex was okay, but nothing special.
you know how to push the buttons and do a great job putting images into your readers minds. And, I at least, want things to work out right for them. Lets see what you have got on your imaginative mind! ;)
I did this once, with a fellow Staff Sergeant's wife and it was very erotic. She wanted to have another baby but her husband would not breed her in her ovulating periods each month, so she came to me. She never did find out that I had a low sperm count, but she sure enjoyed my hot cum being shot into her. Kacy needs to get impregnated by the Major, who goes on to become a Lieutenant Colonel and Kacy's husband. Maybe she can begin fucking his son as well, as a new wife to the LC and have the son's baby, too in a new family.
Congratulations. Chapters 1 & 2 are beautifully written and running at about the right pace. Nice twists and turns, too. Plse write more! Some ideas: (1) She's assigned to him as a research assistant for 'special projects' and he takes her on the road (if you'll excuse the pun); (2) She gets pregnant, and how they both handle the situation; (3) He is shifted to a Training Command on his promotion and she joins the military as a trainee under his authority; and so on.....you've left a bucketful of options in this clever story.
I do not leave comments very often, however for those few that I do comment on they truly must be exceptional. Your use of imaginative description is wonderful. The images that you have painted within your writing truly makes me hunger for the continuation of this story. I urge you to please write more; your readers are all waiting with baited breath to find out what is going to happen between Craig and Kacy. Please do not keep us all wait too much longer.