by patricia51
Sweet, hot and funny.
I loved the way the authour contrasted the the incompetent arrogance of the jocks with humble competence of the nerds.
A fun little story.
Well done.
Some of your phrasing is wonderful "She flowed up to him".
Excellent piece of writing. Slightly unbelievable, but as a former college geek, I want to believe.
Nice story! When I was in high school over 35 years ago, there was a period when I dated the "POPULAR" girls. MOST OF THEM WERE RATHER SPOILED AND SELF-CENTERED. MY FATHER GREW DISGUSTED WITH MY CHOICE OF FRIENDS AND HAD A TALK WITH ME. HE TOLD ME THAT MOST ANY YOUNG WOMAN WAS PHYSICALLY ATTRACTIVE AND TO LOOK FOR THE BEST PERSON, WHETHER SHE WAS POPULAR OR NOT. I TOOK HIS ADVICE AND DATED SOME WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL LADIES. THIS STORY REMINDS ME OF THAT.
NOOKIEHUNTER
The girls seemed to be looking for the best fuck they could find and it didn't matter who gave it to them. Just to slutty.
I have to say.. Even though it sounds cliché… I’ve had both “Nerds” and “Jocks”…. And I have to say the “Nerds” tend to be the ones worth keeping around… this story just makes me feel warm, fuzzy and totally justified ;)
I have liked the whole Roomies series. What I like best about your writing is that it is erotic and not just porn slam bam thank you maam type stuff. Of course I haven't read everything you have written. At least not yet!
Amazing. Brilliant piece of literature. You should really write more.