by aurelius1982
Good job. I would love to read what happens next. Does she leaves him and become a slut or does he becomes a cuckload
Can you please write this chapter from bela's point of view, the other previous chapters from her point of view are great.
You have make readers understand, what erotica really means. Can you please add another chapter where Bela tell her husband why she took the decision to let Riaz fuck her.
Hi,
Hats off!!! I have been reading erotic stories for almost 10 years now. I have read stuff posted on several websites. But I have never read anything as titillating and as hot as this series ever before.
You know, I always wanted to read some good stuff with Indian backdrop. Many writers attempted it and some even did a good job and I am sure more stories with Indian background would be posted here in future. But they will have to think out of the box to reach anywhere closer to what you have created here.
Amazing idea, vivid description, every scene was completely Indian and impeccable language – this story had everything that an amazing story should have. It made me horny, completely. This five part series was a one sitting story, and I completed it in one go.
This story certainly deserves the best story award not only at literotica.com but at all erotic story websites.
Wish you all the best.
please continue the story..Its really amzing, I am mesmerized...please add a chapter where Shyam f**k Bela...
You're either a student of psychology or someone who has read stories written by one.
dude, this is a masterpiece...an absolute rollercoaster...I cannot thank you enough!
hey friend...gr8 story for sure.
But surely i didnt get the end........it was really abrupt and harsh......
Can u write one more chapter to elaborate as to why that happened in the end...............Thanks...........
i think this the most hot, nice , cool sex story i have ever read in my life.... actually i should say it is a novel..a made two character alive...a wonderful climax..please please keep it up
I would have liked it even more if the story continued the way it has started. But in my point of view, the introduciton of Bela's childhood with her parents has totally disappointed me. if the story had been continued with the wife's exhibitionism & gone through sex with another man, a threesome & a gangbang, fucking outdoors and becoming a slut in a pattern, it would have been really great.
Great story which will encourage other husbands to come forward. The hot trend even in small indian towns nowadays is that numerous husbands are encouraging their hot wife's to have sex with another man while they watch. A man should be proud of his hot wife.
Am fond of fucking married woman and u said she was hot
I cmpltly travelled n felt the amount of lust in this story!!!!!..pleaseeeeee cntinue n write more chapters of it..uske baad kya hua..i want more chapters man..its was soooo damn awesome..!!!
I too a writer but don't want to reveal my name.. Seriously saying this.. I don't have a habit of reading big stories in a short time but this story from the beginning till end in 7th chapter made me to stick my eyes on the story and forget the world.. wow what a kind of emotion + kinky + erotic story.. truly a marvellous master piece work done by the author.. 200% confident that if this author think of publishing his works with a price tag under erotic collections.. it will rule the world for sure.. wow wow wow I am speechless especially the ending one line is enough to burst out cock.. classic yet erotic and kinkiest to the core.. ammmaaazzziinnngggg.. kisses to the author's hand for giving this creation.. please write more stories plssssssssssssssss
Not only it cheats on its ratings, but write its own favorable anon comments ! But that is normal for their breed. They ALL do it. God-damned lowlifes !
Great story!!
Would love to read wife's perspective about the last part. Please write it.
best story i ever read. It would be great to read it what happens afterwords... an update aurelius? please
A mixture of shock, coldness, confusion, arousal and all other emotions I can't even remember hit me at the end when she looked out the window, saw her husband and screamed 'HARDER!'
This writer is good as this is not just erotica but also passion, mystery and twist rolled up in one.
An amazing story, one of the best I've read! Leaves the reader on a cliffhanger! More on 'Bella & Gautam' please!
Like Rashoman said way back in 09, this husband is a cuckload. This wife is whore, even in India.
This is the best ever story by aurelius1982. Wish to see more similar stories.
Episodes of Shyam and Bela are very erotic.
Really wish this story will keep on going.
(Even read other author HornyNRI version of Bela, as it dealt with Shyam and Bela)
Thanks for the story.
Please continue the story. Searching for these type of stories alot.
Please don't stop, give more updates
DEAR AURELIUS1982,
GREAT SERIES...
GREAT CONCEPT...
GREAT DESCRIPTION...
GREAT BUILT UP...
GREAT CULMINATION...
EACH CHAPTER BETTERED THE LAST ONE...
"YEH DIL MAANGE MORE!!!"
Nothings wouldn't recognize a good story if it bit him on the ass. This proves it.
A lovely story. But it should have continued for a few more chapters exploring her desired and further degradation into the world of extreme lust