by ronde
Good grief, you've done it again, Ronde!
Only this time I've been half-crying with laughter.
Wonderful well-rounded characters, sly clever story line, glorious comedy... well done. Brilliant as always.
A really good read! Literate, funny, sensitive and entertaining. Keep up the good work.
enjoyed the story but thought maybe Jase would have got into Dixies pants towards the end, she may be old but she still wants to screw
This story was a 5 star till the last page . Too much useless sex ,should have sprinkled it in ,and a finnally in Italy .
Thanks for the story ,Mad Dwarf
The characters have a unique blend of getting into and out of situations. Seems you could spend more time on these type stories, all of which are an excellent read. Having read them all, I seems like you could meet them anywhere on the streets of Nashville. Very well written, write more exploits please.
I could read these tales all day long and never get bored....this was a fun one and full of humour too....loved the way the they all interacted with each other and Dixie was a hoot.....keep them coming....let's have more of the exploits of Jase and Carla and the girls...love them...
not bad for a short tale about a private detective during the holidays. it was fun to read. now I have to find the other three in the series.
A very interesting and entertaining story for the first three pages. Really didn't need the sex for the whole last page to fill out the story, it just seemed so out of place. Don't get me wrong, I like reading about sex, that's why I read Erotica, but this story just didn't need the detailed action at the last.