by ronde
It was both funny and erotic, not to mention well written.
Keep up the good work!
- Mr X.
you never know what will happen if you start messing with ghouls and ghosties hehehe - nice one
Enjoyed the story. You have got to do a follow-up with a return visit by "succubus" Katie. Maybe she could sexily spook the whole group, including the revenge-minded Dean's wife, into some real intimate fun.
Light hearted fun, good writing skill and a nicely seductive sex scene. Very well done. Hope you write more. My computer doesn't seem to be registering the 5 stars I tried to give. I'll try later. Thanks for a hot-fun story.
Kind of a silly little story that's kind of boring. I didn't hate it, just didn't like it either.
So your mother goes and fucks your boyfriend behind both your backs and leaves evidence so you will know, that is all kinds of wrong.
Its a good way to ruin your kids relationship with the boyfriend and you.
I know this site is about everybody fucking everybody but still its pretty fucked up. Not a nice mother...