All Comments on 'This Time, Forever'

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neonlyteneonlytealmost 20 years ago
Congratulations

Nicely done, well constructed with sufficient realism to hold it together.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Magic~

Simply marvelous...endearing, loved your story...GOOD LUCK (~_*)

cookiejarcookiejaralmost 20 years ago
Lovely...

I'm very impressed. A simply wonderful story. Good luck with the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful Pen

Very conversational - as though we were listening in - you are a story teller to the enth degree - Thanks and Best Regards

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