by mtnman2003
worked for me!
at the beginning, I thought you might leave us hanging til ch 2 to see if Mommy joined in, but I was happy you didn't. Loved the use of detail, the slow build up. The end sagged a bit.
sequel please?
that story was so fucking hot.. I came before I could even get to the second page. my pussy thanks you!
I LOVE ALL THE DIRTY TALK. IT WAS SO NASTY! I WISH THERE WERE MORE LIKE IT MY PUSSY IS SOAKED I CAME SO HARD!
This story is easily my favorite I've ever read, and lets say I read ALOT.