All Comments on 'Warlock Ch. 08'

My 2 cents

I love this story and story line. I hope your mind continues to spew forth more of this story. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Not bad... Aside from the absolutely terrible female anatomy.

Well done... I'm curious to find out about Jennaca's resistance/compatibility with John. Sounds like she could be a keeper.

I find the characters in this story so interesting and you made them so varied and unique. Even though John is a demon or part demon, I am hoping he finds a way to replace Corsas tongue. That is something I have never read in a story and I can imagine that the things she would like to say would be very interesting and possibly helpful at some point. This story continues to be everything I could hope for and more since it is so different than the usual AD&D/old timey tales and having an infernal as the leader even more so considering he isn’t your typical cruel leader type demon.

I’d really like to have 3-4 page chapters. I’d wait longer but 1.5 pages is just too short for a chapter. Personal opinion.