All Comments on 'Hotwife Transformation'

by Brittni4u

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Simply Amazing!

I wish this was my wife!

InspiriniousInspiriniousover 5 years ago

I always love the woman's point of view. Fabulous!

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 5 years ago
Marvelously Wicked Poetry!

Five stars. You have captured the essence of the Hotwife ethos. Love between husband and wife is still there undeniably, but with the added spice of taking lovers to keep things fresh.

Well Done!

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 5 years ago
Outstandingly Captured the Hotwife Lifestyle

Britt you have outdone yourself again. An arousing and erotic hotwife story in poetry. I can only give 5 Stars...even though...it deserves 10. Girl...you are amazing.

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 5 years ago
Great

Great as always, Britt! Five Stars! Although anxious to have you myself, I give you much more time to recover from taking that cock from your well-hung lover!

amadeuseroticamadeuseroticover 5 years ago
Well done

You told of the hotwife and cuckold with style

Making the story well worth our while

With cum in your mouth, in your cunt and your arse

Your fabulous tale is deserving five stars

RodThrustinRodThrustinover 5 years ago
Time for Rhyme

I just read a poem

by Brittni 4U

and I feel compelled

to give her her due.

Her hot wife story

told like a poet

proves she has talent

and is eager to show it.

Britt, you are sweet

and naughty and good

I gave you five stars

'cause that's the most that I could.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Never ceases to amaze me!

AAAAAAGGGHHH!

Gentlemen,

This is a satisfying sigh!

5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I wish this was my wife too

Once again Brittni you nailed it. (I wish my wife was openly like this... as long as she’s prepared to share...!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So hot

So fucking hot. Excellent set-up, great rhymes and beautiful attention to details. So dirty, sensual and arousing. My favorite part was: 

"Climaxing so hard, I started to cry,

every position, we just had to try.

Doggie style and oh how I rode,

maximum pleasure, he felt that he owed. 

Filled me up, emptied his balls,

stretched me out and gaped my walls.

We just couldn’t stop, so hours went by,

collapsed exhausted, we let out a deep sigh. 

Sleeping together as long as we could,

woke me up with his large morning wood,

Before heading back home, I must make,

that size in my butt, I must take. 

Anal sex with him was not easy,

making me slutty and borderline sleazy?

He grunted and growled and filled my tight ass,

plenty more semen, he was able to pass. 

When I got home, tattered and squeaking,

from both of my holes, I couldn’t stop leaking.

My hubby excited for me to regale,

cock in hand, while I give him my tale. 

Oh honey, you wouldn’t‘ve believed,

the pleasure this girl, most certainly received. 

First sucking him off before feeling his tongue,

then taking his thrusts from a man so hung. 

We must now hurry, no time to waste,

several deposits, I want you to taste.

Your mouth gets busy between my thighs,

consuming all of those amazing creampies.

Now that you’ve cleaned, my lover’s warm seed,

insert your penis, to fulfil your top need.

You are so horny, it's close to a sickness,

can barely feel you because of his thickness."

That made me so fucking hard. Great job.

Keep up the great work, Brittni. You are so talented, passionate; and kinky.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hot damn..

Loved this! Very hot and well written!

NICHOLXNICHOLXalmost 3 years ago

iT'S TRUE...sugar and spice and everything nice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very hot making the hubby have the ultimate reward. Thank you again Brittni

pranaykathapranaykatha4 months ago

A wonderful story so beautifully told

How a wife became a hotwife so bold

I liked the way it went on to be hotter

Prose could be fine, but poetry was better

The story has been popular, I know

I read the comments also, you know

This will help a lot of husbands for sure

Whose pockets are rich but pants are poor

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