by Lauren Hynde
so luck is outta luck!!
you list this as non erotic, well, I found it rather intoxicating and woman, you're on fire!!
thoroughly enjoyed the pace of this one and the commanding tone. very well done, Ms Hynde
The muses have heard you in this hot-blooded write.
Saw this on the 30/30 thread and immediately thought,
This should be posted for all to see ~
A real poem for the survivor realm;
Now all you need do is get your 30/30 ticket punched.
And I'll concur here, this is one really hot nonerotic piece, going from an appeal to the muses to finding the lover with qualities you seek.
I really like this one. My only question is about "chromatic, atonal, pentatonic songs". I'm not a musician, but I would have thought "chromatic" and "pentatonic" would be mutually exclusive.
Really good poem.