All Comments on 'My Hot Wet Tight Pussy'

by Lauren Hynde

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TzaraTzaraover 17 years ago
Breathtaking and beautiful.

Deep feelings, wonderfully expressed. :heart:

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
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shove it up all the way - what is *it*??

Long line breaks and punctuation would've help this poem tremendously. The flow was rather rocky, and I didn't feel any emotion. It seems sloppily thrown together.

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