All Comments on 'The Great Pump-Kin'

I love the structure and the sentiment .

To quote Charlie Brown: "Oh, brother."

5/5 would kiss my cousin again.

Great job, I know this was all in fun, but its actually really good, some good phrasing and a nice rhythm to it. Obviously your title came from the immortal Peanuts special and now I'm thinking Lucy and Linus? Charlie Brown and Sally? Good Grief!

"The unholy gourd..." Love it!

within us fans a secret flame "

No truer words have been spoken.

Djmac1031 already said what I was thinking...."Good Grief!"

I loved your poem so much that read it numerous times. You're such an awesome poet, Laura.... :) Stella

I loved your poem, I have no one to share it with, but if I did i gladly would. My wife would not understand. I enjoy your stories also...

I love the pacing and rhythm. It carries it's cadence all the way through. Beautiful use of language. Bravo.

I think you can sing this to any reel with eight bar phrases, but alas it's only 7 phrases. If it were eight there would be lots of 32 bar and 64 bar tunes to fit it.

Sorry. i read it, but I really have no comment except I think your gift is story telling. Hope you will return to share that gift with us.