All Comments on 'The Kiss'

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 1 year ago

Captured the momentary hesitancy that gives way to so much feeling. Your poem makes it so easy to recall those moments when hands finally touched/held, when eyes meet and you know, and finally the taste/feel of the first kiss — you are so right, electric.

IvHAuthorIvHAuthorabout 1 year agoAuthor

😄 Thanks so much, @Migbird! Appreciate your feedback. Today's poems were also set to music. I'm hoping that I can eventually post the songs somewhere.

BlissMaraBlissMaraabout 1 year ago

Soft and comforting in its sensuality. Lovely imagery throughout. Such a great read! 5*

IvHAuthorIvHAuthorabout 1 year agoAuthor

@BlissMara Thank you for reading and for the 5 stars! Really glad you enjoyed it. 😊

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 year ago

Tender romance…

IvHAuthorIvHAuthorabout 1 year agoAuthor

@Paul4play Thank you 😊. Have a great night!

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