All Comments on 'A Flirting Workshop with My Sister'

Can't wait for the new stories. I've loved all your other works.

Great to see another one of your stories return. Even better is that you have improved it. Please keep up creating new works and reposting the rest of the old ones.

Very hot, thanks for this story! 5/5

Excellent. Can we have some more, please?

This is so great! A true feel good story without any of the depression and misery that infiltrates too many stories. I have my real life to feel bad. I read stories here to try to take a break from life’s misery ! And I sure do thank YOU, Eight for making it possible!

Another great story as always. Excited to see what new stories you have in store for us.

Yes another well written story. A follow one would be fantastic is Katharine keeps her grades up and moves colleges to share with Z. So good to see the great relationship between the trio and the extended circle of friends.

It was okay.

I'm not usually one for slow burns, but god dammit Dmitri's fantastic. I'm like 2 pages in and every word he says makes me laugh

I want to congratulate you on teaching me a little about linguistics. I saw that Z's full last name was Zajczkowski, and I remembered you mentioning Ukrainian in the author's note. However, I was almost certain that the "cz" letter combination is pretty common in Polish. I did a few minutes of Googling and found a few things for anyone else interested: while "cz" is pronounced how English pronounces "ch" and while Ukrainian has a letter representing the same sound, the "cz" is not Ukrainian in origin. Rather, "cz" is from old Czech orthography, and was adopted by Latin. While Czech eventually dropped the "cz" in favor of the č, Polish kept it, meaning that the word Czech technically doesn't even use the Czech pronunciation, presumably because č isn't in English orthography. Thank you for coming to my TED talk

Very good, with an interesting end...

Good characters, and with a variety of interesting ladies, it almost seemed too bad Giselle was not in the cards

Z doing THAT something for Katharine was quite the twist...

Lots of intriguing promise for the future for our intrepid college students

Hmmm, I apologize for the fragments.

Five for you

would like there to be a follow up of this story

Thanks for all the comments! They are what keep me motivated to write.

As for the commenter who researched "cz", thanks for posting that as I found it interesting. To clarify, the mention of Ukrainian in the author's notes was about Dmitri, not Z or Eli.

Great story. Going in my favorite stories folder in my bookmarks for a future reread. I like stories of sibling who are in love and not just stories where one blackmails the other or has to coerce the other for sex only with no emotional attachment. Would love to see a continuance of this story. If Katherine does move to Z and Eli's college, she could be Eli's public girlfriend while Z was his secret girlfriend.

Fantastic!

I loved it.

Again, another great story. I really enjoy the great reveals, they solidify some of the "why's" in some of the plots, leading to an "lets finish strong" ending. I enjoy your character development, it's not over stated with useless information, and provides enough background so your readers will develop empathy for your character's. I really enjoyed this story's ending because one of the main actors didn't get what she thought she wanted, but when she really needed. Yet another fantastic read, thank you.

What a banger. I loved the twist at the end where Z takes control and makes Katie experience what making love feels like.

Amazing story. Wish you continue more with Z and Eli's story.

Finally can re read it again! Can wait for another your new and old story to be uploaded

This is an amazing story with a slow and steady development.

would be an amazing change up to make the sister the older one.. its always the " little sister " like there are no older sister in this world

It's been a while since I read your original version of this, but this one just feels different. It's not in a bad way, though. It's got a slower burn to it, but it never felt like the pacing was off and it easily kept me interested the whole way through. Honestly, wonderful work once again.

I thought the both Eli and Z was educated young people, but apparently they haven’t heard Benjamin Franklins expression “ three people can keep a secret, if two of them are dead “

The whole involvement of Katharine is such a fundamental mistake, seeing how she manipulates everyone around her, and pushing Z to be a cocktease towards Eli’s friends, making them give her “gifts” that she then show off for them?

And apparently Eli is a bit of cockhold, content with being “ a secret boyfriend “ while Z gets to do what ever she wants? This relationship has disaster printed all over it, the lies and deceit towards their parents and family will spill out at some point. What will the do when Eli graduates and moves on with his career? Who is going to be Z secret boyfriend then? I don’t Z and Katharine making it as roommates and keep Z celibate during her last years at university.

Loved this story! The slow build, the quirky characters (I'm thinking Z was on the spectrum), the sex, and the romance all made for a smart story with just enough twists to keep in fun and interesting. Good job!

There has to be a part 2 in there

Katharine is manipulative and is a tease for literally no reason. Involving Katharine at all with the siblings was a bad idez

I was on pg 4 and was getting really suspicious with Katherine's character that I jumped to the end & was right. I had an inkling that Katherine will be involved in the relationship as a 3rd party and quickly lost interest. I prefer just the siblings, no need to include someone else so thanks for the 4 pages but I'll stop there.

nice happy twist in the end 5/5

Read the whole thing last night, I love slow burns like this one! Characters were all fun and mostly believable. One thing that really made me role my eyes though was the kissing scene with the three of them at the end, because it's the biggest exposition dump I've ever read. I think that scene could have been cut in half and still be hot, informative and fun. I felt like I was reading the end of a harry potter book, where the characters all gather around at the end and explain all the weird stuff that happened at school that year. This could have also been fixed with some bigger chapters from Z's perspective. Other than that I loved the whole story, Z is a cute name, Eli is a giga chad, Katherine is a naughty gorl, Dimitri is a gentlemen. Even if some stuff isn't believable, I don't care... ITS SMUT!! and good smut too. 9/10 would fix some grammar and miss spells if you can, and of course cut the exposition a little but still very much enjoyed the read.

This was another great story by my favorite author. Similar to other commenters, I generally don't like the idea of "adding" another party to the mix (if the siblings are romancing, a 3rd person subverts that something special to a mere sex) and was about to break off with a 4* rating, but unlike HiddenAgenda and the Anon I am glad I read through the stairway kissing scene through to the end, because Katherine was not "added" - she was an integral part of the relationship and just like Z learned to be flirtatious, K was taught to become serious about love. As it ended up in lovemaking and not a mere (however steamy) fucking session, there is nothing to justify docking a star fron my rating. Perfect ***** it is

Love your stuff, excellent