by Contrasting
I've been waiting patiently for the next installment of your novel, but I'm running out of making excuses for you!
Lol
It is a fun story and I am sure many share my opinion, when are you planning to post the next damn chapter??!!! :)
Great character development - love the psychological insights
I have read a significant number of stories here but none better than yours!! Your description of sex is, it seems stand alone events.
Great writing, superb metafo's and superior story weaving.