All Comments on 'A Mom's Symbol Ch. 02'

Just my personal opinion but I'm sorry I think you lost me with this one.

Chapter One was borderline for me personally, Mother sacrificing to protect her son, then getting addicted to the sex and abuse? Not the most original or realistic but still within the realm of possibility although I personally don't like the ones where the mother gets off on the abuse her son receives but it's almost expected in this genre so I kept going.

But this one pretty much killed my interest in the story with the daughter becoming an instant bimbo slut within a minute of meeting the bully. I mean at that point the story could have been placed in the Mind Control category and been more believable.

Adding in the daughter would have been fine but I felt it needed to either happen gradually via some kind of seduction or if it happened quickly then do it through blackmail or some kind of deal like what supposedly happened with the mother to get it started.

In the end you write the story you want to tell but I just don't think it's my cup of tea anymore.

This is not even entertaining. Praising a bully, complete B.S. Both stories in this series are complete trash!

just fucking nasty - this kind of story shouldnt exist.

5/5

Mr. Author

Can you do something that has some originalty by making plot twist like James start to have desired to fuck real pussy and get rid of his bully and claim his mother and sister for himself?

i thought both stories were trash. all i can think is you personally put yourself in the place of the bully or have no respect for women at all. no entertainment value at all... i dont care what or how you write, if i read it you will get the lowest rating

available. youre sick and need to seek help

Honestly reading all the crybabies in the comments is almost as entertaining as the story itself lol

A plot twist would be nice so the story is the not same as every other bully/mother fetish story that is out there. This story is currently is following the same common script.

Wow literotica really hates this kind of story. I liked it, sometimes im in the mood for something darker. Though you should have taken more time with the sister, turned it into more of a seduction.

More pleasee

And post more .

and don't care about trolls trashing this story

Best story in this pathetic site. Also to the people complaining, what did you guys expected from a cuckold story of bully fucking a mother

I love how the Realdeal dude is like, "Hey this isn't original, make it an incest story... on Literotica, now THAT'S original." lolol

I love that the story includes other family members as well. I want to see son get cucked in face to face. and please make the son wear a chastity cage. humiliate the son to the point he no longer a man but a slave.

JUST HURT THE SON.

Amazing! I really hope you write more!

The only way this story can be saved from complete unbelievability is if it turns out Alex is an alien hybrid with hypno-powers.

Don't listen to the haters this story is phenomenal

Disgusting,I have read some full of shit stories on this site but this one surpass all of them. It is not even an incest story but the writer deserves an oscar for his 2 parts autobiography. I never ever read any story written by such a writer.

The story's great so far,

The story's great so far, but it wouldn't hurt to pace it a little slower. We're all anxious to get to the "good stuff," and you have a gift for these sex scenes, but I find it's better if you take a little more time to get there. More time spent on the bond between brother and sister, or mother and son without Alex would make it that much hotter when he sees them betray him. Just my two cents. Either way keep it up

Please finish this

THE BEST PLZ MAKE LOTS AND LOTS MORE!!!!!!!!!

this is so incredible. loved the first part as well. openly cucking the son is the best, and i hope both mom and sis humiliate him even further, maybe even take part in the bullying. i hope the mom remains the focus, please keep going

I dunno mother cucking son is a topic thats so dark and twisted that I enjoy reading, but with sis I guess it doesnt hit the same way.

You are a gifted writer. Keep going!

The only thing James can do is disappear or shoot Alex. This is so sick. For a mother to completely turn on son and husband that she says she loves is pathetic. Then add the sister is sad. Enough.

Then James got his head out of his ass and sent his mothers affair to his father. His father divorced his mother and left her heartbroken at the fact that she stupidly ruined her marriage for a slightly bigger dick. James father later hired men to go to Alex’s house. The men beat him so severely that it was doubted that he’d ever walk again and his balls were so fucked up that he’d never have sex again unless he was getting pegged. The police suspected that James or his father committed this crime but they could never connect them so they had to drop the case.

bollocks I agree with anonymous three months ago

I think in reality the son even before seeing his sister becoming his bullys slut would of packed his bags, and left as soon as he but everything on the internet.

Obviously his dad is clueless and probably a closet wimp.

Another amazing entry. I love how the sister slowly but eventually fell to the same depth of depravity as her mother did and realised her mothers side of things being used by Alex. Also she said she’d willingly leave her father and brother (whom she was previously stated to love dearly) for Alex and his cock. She said so cheerfully too. Which was a great added piece of lore.

She seriously folded so deeply too. Completely enthralled by Alex. Which was surprising to me. Also I loved the licking scene with lily and her daughter that was hot. Their definitely gonna do that more in the next chapter I bet. Also at the end James? I feel like he’s gonna be turned into a sissy and join in ending the series as all 3 become Alex’s property

So I mean post nut clarity is a thing plus I’m inherently light natured. It’s impossible but I’d like at the end of it all that Alex gets his due end, and the mother/daughter duo recover and come back to the family. Obviously this won’t happen but I’d like if it did after all this