All Comments on 'A Summer Beginning'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Your story was well written, and edited well, which gave you 3 stars. I felt as though I was on the river and watching your story and your love unfold which turned the 3 into a 5. Once I got to the end, and a silent tear fell I knew I would be watching for your next story. Well done.

gtw

Your story was nice and the end specially was quite emotional. Oveall I'll give it a 4.

the fact they were together till death took her

and that there love was solid

great story

really enjoyed it

thank you

You made me feel like I was there!!

Now that was a lovely tale. Even got a lump in my throat at the last few lines. Good reading and writing. Thanks, J. Cheers!

My appearance is a big, tall, strong, solid, man's man...and this brought tears to my eyes at the end! A love story for the ages! Thanks for sharing!

It was perfect. Oh, almost perfect. I didn't want Tris to join the fun, but that is just me. What a wonderful build up. Humorous too. Very sexy and well written story!

I have to say this is the best I have read; and I have read a few. Bravo!

Really nice well written story, gutted me at the end

A beautifully told story about a war hardened marine & a young virgin who gave him her all, well done. A few small things troubled me a little, how come they were able to get away with their first episode without being seen by any of the other girls & why did he think $350 was a lot of money to babysit 7 teenage girls, hell I'd want $7500.

5 *****

The answer to your first question can be found in, A Summer Beginning 2 when it come out a few weeks from now.

As for the second: Because $300 was almost a full weeks pay! Besides, how bad could they be, right?

Like I said, not the sharpest crayon in the box.

Thank you, one and all for the very kind words.

Heart wrenching romance. The ending had me bawling like a baby.

Well done!

Glad to know that there is another chapter in the works.

Thank you for sharing your story.

The last paragraph and closing line topped the tale off perfectly! A wonderfully masterful job of portraying the love two people can share.

you might consider using an editor to fix your punctuation and grammar errors. Keep up the good work!

Exceptional THANK YOU!!

xxxhugsxx

Ending is powerful. Would have liked more romance together though