All Comments on 'A Week at the Lake with My Sister (Old)'

Thank you for putting this back up. I love both versions, but this one I feel is a little more entertaining. (Possibly because it was first)

Thank you for resubmitting this for me. Sorry I can’t get signed in right now. Loved it.

Thanks for reposting the original story.

I originally gave it 5/5 when l first read it and again give it 5/5 this time around.

I’ve already given the new version 5/5 as well

Thanks for putting it back up. Was disappointed to see it was taken down. Definitely one of the best stories out there. Sorry you got so much criticism, that definitely wasn't deserved. Looking forward to the update though.

This version is definitely the better one.

I felt like this one dwelled more on Paul's game, yet he got broken up with the last story over it.

All in all I enjoyed every one of your stories

Thanks for being now able to read both versions, while the outcome maybe similar how they got there is quite a change between the 2 options, they both have there merits, personally I do prefer the new version, but only because i read that first maybe couldn’t see the swap working, but now reading the background behind it may it could have gone down this was as well.

Your new version much better.

Glad the original is back - still great

I love both versions equally, it was great to be able to read this version again. Thank you!

Interesting web you weaved. I personally could not deal with that level of manipulation and deceit.

That being said, reading this was like having a front row seat to a slow moving train derailment.

So yes, I was entertained.

Great love story

Crap I'd like a 3rd version involving Paul even less. You really play your female leads good and your males horrible. You don't seem to know how to write emotion or thought into the males. They're all like 12 year olds or something. You'll go into a page or two or 15 paragraphs about something really mundane and get descriptive about apartment hunting or describing another thing but once it gets to the emotional parts it's focused on the female side. Not one female climaxed during sex. Tho it's been said to not happen all the time it does indeed happen. There is a lot of disconnect in those scenes that makes you wonder why these chick's are even after this dude other than convenience. Most of your stories turn into a type of cuck fest where they only find love by being shown the worst possible way to get there. Forcing people into situations not normally happening to spice up the scene. You don't want to root for this person or that or get invested in them because you know there's going to be a twist coming up that will change that. Most males in each story cum one and roll over and say thats incredible and it's like huh? Are these guys all 50 overweight with bad hearts? Most you're characters are under 30.most have the labido? To get hard quite quickly after but they don't. Everytime you think they're actually going to focus on the female their minds wander to odd places or they say odd things in the middle of a passionate moment.. Aye, aye, captain? I love you too? Never one had someone said I love you so much or I love you forever or go beyond I love you too. Like you would say to family, not someone you're in love with. Anyways you're really good at writing but also not really good. You give lots of detail and definition to many mundane parts and lack on the meat of the stories. Tho your stories are good, they could be epic.