All Comments on 'Adriana and the Buttapboo'

This is a very well-written story. It's polished and has an excellent build-up to the climax. The author does a great job detailing Adriana's journey step by step. Definitely worth the read! 5 stars!

How can you not love a love potion story?

Marketing slogan for the plant: “Buttapboo ®️ — anal is guaranteed”

Regardless of the possibility of experiencing a double entendre ... this wordsmith's ability to build towards a climax is magical! It is a joy to read a very well-written story. It might just be the Buttapboo talking, but definitely worth the 5 stars!

Read the title

I loved it. It's nice to read a romantic story on this site instead of the usual hard fuck and suck dribble. This still had hot sex but it got the story. Well done. Five stars and a favorite point!

Rare to see a mind control story be more of a love story, though I wish the revelation to Adriana was more fleshed out, and more of the dramatic potential had been explored.

that as well as the epilogue overall felt pretty glossed over as if the author was in a hurry to finish.

Nothing less.

And I like happy endings! *****

A slow start but, oh wow, I've been perusing literotica for years and THIS is my absolute favorite! Well done!

Very well written. No one does a BJ description anywhere near as well

I meant to mention this in my earlier comment. Did you get the idea for the plant from the Zoroastrians use of Haoma in their ceremonies? There is a decent wiki article on it. Zoroastrians in Iran still export the plant to Parsees in India where it will not grow.

Bbeautiful

One if the best and most intriguing stories here.

Would love to read a second part.

Well written, intriguing concept, brilliant execution, fun, and very sexy!

Is there a part 2 coming?

Truly delightful and so well written. Top marks. Thank you for sharing your story.

Best read ever in my five years of reading

Why do people put stuff like this here?

I've read this half a dozen times, and each time I finish with a feeling of contentment, that all is right with the world. As a story, it's elegant, concise and powerful in the examination of the heroine's emotions. As characters they are intelligent, proud - and yet humble, witty and humorous. As a plant, it's on my Christmas list. They only thing that's on the list.

Great story

Thank you, ma'am. 5*

I'm surprised she didn't crash the plane, given how worked up and distracted she was!

On the subject of planes:

FYI: "back to the steering wheel where it belonged." In a plane, the 'steering wheel' is called a 'yoke', because the 'steering', (side to side), is done with the feet.

Hope all is well with you.

GeoD

Great story!

Thank you for the privilege.

Awesome story. Potential to swing the harem route, but it works as a standalone too.

If I had one criticism, it would be that, after dedicating so much of the story to the ramping up of Adriana's libido and emotions, you almost completely skipped over their first sexual encounter.

That being said, still an easy 5-stars.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

Excellent. Pleased to see the MC did not let success corrupt him or the relationship.

You are soo special , the stories and your talent.

Terrific romance with a Hollywood twist..

This is an amazing, well told and romantic love story. Thank you for sharing.