All Comments on 'Aloha Lovers'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Superb

Great story well written, thank you.

Landrious1Landrious1over 18 years ago
Hope we see more of this kinky couple soon!

Great story! Well written and hot sex!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot Sex

just wanted to say though, I'm from Hawaii and part Hawaiian, and there is no 'y' in the Hawaiian alphabet :)

very hot, keep up the good work ;)

-Kaualani

Magnus_St0rmMagnus_St0rmalmost 14 years ago
Unbelievable

I understand these stories are fantasies, but the best fantasies are the ones we can believe MIGHT happen. There's no way I'm believing that the straight-laced good-girl Kylie was bent to the kinky side that quickly. She acted like a chemical shift had occurred to change her personality. Come on, ANAL SEX? just because Keylani lubed her up and suggested it in a whisper?

mthomas63mthomas63about 11 years ago
Really, Rreally Good

I'm reading your stories again, after a hiatus. And enjoying them very much. You have the kind of mind I like, very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Superb

So totally fucked up and debauched, more and more. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.

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