All Comments on 'Auntie's New Tenant Ch. 02'

Hello,

I'm a grammaholic (sic). I cringe when I see the misuse of I and me. I'm not interested in being rude or nasty to you. I just need to point you to this URL to answer the age long question: Where do I use me, and where do I use I. There are other errors that your editor or editors missed, provided you are using same. The first step to better grammar is admitting you have a grammar problem. As you can see, I don't have punctuation under control, however, I'm working on it.

BTW, I tried to contact you privately by the contact tab, but I was required to sign up for yahoo. It took me years to completely be rid of AOL. I don't want any more of that type of hassle.

cmechuck@fuse.net

the story is more important. With stories as consistently good as his, I can overlook a few grammar problems from Brett.

Keep up the great story telling - I, amongst many I am sure, enjoy Brett's work everytime I find one of his stories.

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Have I mentioned it isn't as good yet?

BrettJ

Loved the story just read part 1 & 2 please keep them cummming ...Looking forward to more of this story and more of your work !!

Having read several of your stories, each drags me in immediately. Keep writing, and I don't think you will lack for readership. I know I will keep reading for sure.

Excellent story, smokin' hot with great sex. More, please.

Any chance of having Dad and Penny brought into the story; maybe penny's booze problem stemmed from sex issues that her son might be able to fix. Worth a thought.

Thank you.

this story was awsome. I would like to see there relationship evelove though.please make another chapter.

Nicely written loved the story

I really lked this one, keep 'em cumming.

You could have just had Daniel live with his aunt Katrina as he attended college... Fucking his sister/ her roommate were good additions.... the mother's drinking/rage added nothing to the story.

Ah,to be young again,with a BIG cock,and three women who fuck you senseless!

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