by BrettJ
i thought this story was very sweet and well thought out. Thank you for writing it. I enjoyed reading it.
if you made a goof, I didn't catch it; too involved in a really great read. Nice mix of sex, friendship, and romance. I enjoyed your writing style. Hope you have more stories posted...If not, get on it!!! LOL.
It could of used a little more detail. Not bad though. Also, Yin is not a Vietnamese last name.
Oh wow! That was so sweet! I have tears in my eyes! You write beautifully, keep up the great work!
Any time I feel for the people in the story I know it's good work. I felt something for them... good job, another gold star.
You had me from the first sentence as well. I thought it was just an outstanding story!
I really loved this story. The characters were great and had great chemistry. Great Job!
This was a very well written story that I've read and re-read several times, enjoying it even more each time I read it. Thanks for giving us such a wonderful tale, great job!
Pristine
How can you fit all of that In a single fucking story. It was hot, it was sweet, it was fucking amazing.
Absolutely loved this story. I cried with them. What a difference between this story and the stories that have no ending.