All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 18'

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drose63drose63over 7 years ago
dissapointed

this story started out as one of my favorites but it is losing its appeal.too many participants

LevindlLevindl3 months ago

I am surprised and elated that you actually quoted from “ Full metal jacket“. You do this throughout the story and I wonder how many times people pick up on it or are too young to pick up on these movies that you are quoting from.

This story is very much like another one of yours, yet is different in many ways. I am enjoying it and look forward to see where you go with it.

Sincerely

Daniel

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...