by SteveWallace
this story started out as one of my favorites but it is losing its appeal.too many participants
I am surprised and elated that you actually quoted from “ Full metal jacket“. You do this throughout the story and I wonder how many times people pick up on it or are too young to pick up on these movies that you are quoting from.
This story is very much like another one of yours, yet is different in many ways. I am enjoying it and look forward to see where you go with it.
Sincerely
Daniel