All Comments on 'Blind Girl's Bluff Ch. 02'

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HOG57headHOG57headabout 2 years ago

This is a good story.if you have it in you, i can see a few more chapters, I like your style.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story excellent light hearted humor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I love Sophie's character--and Doofus narrating as the straight man. And I like the depth of the characters you hint at with each of them.

Please continue! So many multi-chapter storied on Lit are either repetitve (background; contrived drama!; shag; lather, rinse, repeat) or just long, drawn-out yawners. This is light, fun, and very interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

FABULOUS!!

Davester37Davester37about 2 years ago

You’re getting warmed up now! This story is miles ahead of the first one. I love the development of those two characters. Geoff is the perfect straight man to Sophie, and she should sell tickets! I can’t wait to meet the parents.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

youngbrainoldbodyyoungbrainoldbodyabout 2 years ago

Oh yeah! No question about it! Definitely a 6! Darn, it only goes to 5. Oh, well; a five will have to suffice! Thank you! I REALLY enjoyed your story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Priceless!

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Okay - I love the story. The characters are coming out nicely. But I have a question. If she is blind, "How does she know "The apartment across the hall got a big Amazon box yesterday." Just wondering. Maybe it was a UPS or Fed-Ex box

TrampsAnThievesTrampsAnThievesabout 2 years agoAuthor

I'll leave that to your imagination but, remember, everything above a whisper in the common area is audible in the apartments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

😂😂😂😂😂 oh the irises compsrison with pussy and the whole box and kidnapping incident i kept on giggling the half

in the rest half i was creaming my panties the taco bell sex scene ummmhhh i will do it with my hubby he loves my orgasm face and moans and shiverings

just like geoffery he loves it when i dry hump myself on his jeans covered dick he loves the fact the i found him so hot that i can get off just by rubbing myself on his lap

i also am a big fan of oral in shower

sophie is brilliant and honest nympho

and geoffery is sneaky and super romantic

best combination

loved it 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Hugo999Hugo999almost 2 years ago

This series is really laugh out loud funny. Very enjoyable and original

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now9 months ago

Wow.

I'm sorry I skipped these parts of this excellent tale.

I remember reading the first part some time ago - but, never noticed the subsequent parts. This is so good.

WalterWoodyWalterWoody9 months ago

Probably the most I have ever laughed out loud to a sexy! story! Very well done and WONDERFUL characters, all around.

gunmakergunmaker8 months ago

DUDE!! You are really missing your calling. Unless you ARE a comedy writer. I must admit that I had no idea. Great story. Even if it is in brail.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc7 months ago

The repartee was entertaining the first chapter but it gets a bit monotonous after a while... 4.4*

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew7 months ago

Great story and characters, easy to read and funny, I give it two thumbs up! Oh wait, 5 stars...

NursesNursesabout 2 months ago

My irises don't stink. Mine have a delightful delicate smell. But not suitable for cut flowers. You cut them and gone within 24 hours

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