All Comments on 'Bride in Black'

A grand story. Thank you

I literally just finished Satyr Play Part 2 and now I'm curious about a specific couple seen walking past the alleyway toward the end...

Great story, love the universe you're building!

I literally just finished Satyr Play Part 2 and now I'm curious about a specific couple seen walking past the alleyway at the end...

Great story and I'm loving the universe you're building! !

You managed to tie this into Satyr Play part 2.I wonder if somehow they will appear in part 3,just like Nathan did?

Another brief enticing glimpse into the Satyr universe.

BurntRedstone delivers to us a character that is literally a blood sucking lawyer. I have to wonder if Eleanor tops off with a little plasma from the operating room supplies when she feels peckish? We also want to know if they got their professional degrees from night school or were they day-walking vampires? We have to get our vampire canon sorted before the zombies show up.

And cut to Goth rock outro.

Stylish, cinematic ending to a great story.

Thanks for writing. 5*

Redstone...as in rocket?

Great work. I appreciate you sharing this.

Was expecting more from you

I wasn't quite sure what was happening, if he was actually killing her.

If he's going to court I would imagine that they're day-walking vampires.

When they relocate, which they must have to as they get "older," how do they get credentials under their new identities? Do they simply go back to school, and ace all their courses?

Enjoyed the story despite gothic horror not being one of my favorite categories. Good effort. Sweet and original ending. Thanks.

Love your build up and leaving the reader wondering what is coming next! You really need to consider writing a novel! Thank you once again!

Now I could say: "Yes. Bride in Black by BurntRedstone."

Worth every one of those 5*s.

From heartache and horror to happiness and hope! As always...well done!!!!!

I liked it, however, you do better work when you expand on the characters’ and give them more room to breath. I’m a fan of yours. And I do like this story. I think that it was too short for the emotional hook you put into your characters. But I still liked it!

This one proves it. Thank you.

Excellent work going from despair to ultimately external happiness, well done.

I do like your writing. I didn't expect much but I got a lot. Setting was well done and characters fleshed out. Most important, I wanted to see what was next.

Charming story. You are very good at putting characters in the deepest pit of despair and finding a shining light. Keep up the good work.

"The aurora borealis, visible over Manhattan?"....a connection with the 'Satyr Play' series?

Very much a BurntRedstone tale-- which is, needless to say, high praise. So far as I noticed there were no brides wearing black in the story, though. Having lived in Manhattan, I love the idea of seeing the Aurora Borealis above the city. I wonder if it would reflect off the glass people?

Utter drivel!!!

I wish there was some way to warn the unsuspecting reader that something supernatural was coming. I would never have read a story of vampires. But I will take care to avoid this author in the future. 2*

Excellent story and as usually expected a story worthy of 5 BIG FAT NOVA TYPE STARS! Thank you once again!

Good one. A vamp duo for the win. It's nice to feel those fiction neuron swishing around little differently.

Yay! Origin story for the Kings! Didn't know this was on your list and I've read Satyr Play through twice now.

I'm pretty sure burntredstone is an author full time and writes these stories just for fun on the side. I've never come across another sex story writer with such imagination and intelligence! Bravo!!

Romance par excellence ...... Lovely ...... And yeah greed is the worst part we call intelligence

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. Beautiful dark romance.

I love how this is linked to Satyr Play. I did wonder about these two in that series.

A wonderful tie in.

Took me a hot minute to realize this was about the Vampire couple in the Satyr Play's series. I love your skill in fleshing out the myriad of characters in your different universes.

Sweet! And to short 😏

Ohh? Now I need to read Sat play! Thank you again

Excellent story! Never tiring reading your genius over and over again! Thank you once again BRS. You're an amazing Author! 5 BIG ASS STARS!

Harlequin Romance Story.

A wonderful little origin story from the Satyr series! I hope there are more.

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Bizaare. Gothic horror and gruesome death to enlightened love, rewarding vocations and companion ship.

Nice link to satyr story.