All Comments on 'Brothers and Sisters Ch. 06'

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bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
AWESOME tale!

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

One big happy and satisfied.

What college will they choose?

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
I got lost, but it was worth the trouble!

More chapters!

Excellent writing .

How do you keep it straight ??!!?

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 2 years ago

Is this "Loosening Up" under a different title? I was enjoying this until they brought up living together. Here comes the polyamory all over again. I am not against it, but how many different polyamory stories can you write and still tell a different story. Why not more different stories in the vane of "Doc and the Porn Star" or "Jim and Edie Again"? I apologize for the negativity. I like the author's writing, but it is sometimes too repetitive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dr beulahthebrit; Sorry, Steve, but this is just a re-hash of `Loosening Up', but without the billionaires. It started so well with just the group of siblings acting as `cover' for each other, but as others are now writing, your stories are now so repetitive, at least in this one we are being spared the `Experience', if I never read that again, I'll die happy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great turn of events, I can not wait to see what kind of house they get. This is a possibility, mortgage lenders do allow this.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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